Friday, April 10, 2009

CHAPTER 2: The Portal

The girls started looking for the basketball right away. They looked high and low until there was only one place to look……. Behind a box.

Lucy lifted the box and shouted,”Found i-... Ella come here, QUICK!”

“Luce what is it and what did you find!?” Ella asked.

“Your basketball, and THAT,” said Lucy pointing to a small door small enough to crawl through.

“Let’s open it!” said Ella reaching for the knob. Her wrist slowly twisted. Then she tugged the knob and slowly opened the door. It was, an empty room.

“Go in,” dared Lucy.

Ella crawled in bumping her head on the way.

“Wooooooooooooaahhhhhhhh!” said Ella, “Lucy you HAVE to see this!

* Original illustrations created with Microsoft Paint.

1 comment:

  1. This is starting to get very interesting! I love the descriptions and I especially like the "sub-descriptions" Like: Her wrist twisted...., and "bumping her head on the way.

    Keep up the good work.